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Morning comes again, Hear betrayal sing its' tune, Insanity pain.

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/30/2011 3:28:00 PM

Interesting.....

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 6/25/2011 8:54:00 PM

I've missed church for a few weeks. I am going tomorrow. We collect prayers there. I am going to write down, "Please pray for my sister, Dawn, that the pain she is suffering ease and that joy again be restored." Is that okay? I would like to do that for you...love you...thinking about you and giving you a big sis hug. One of those bone crushers. By the way, though I know this is about pain, its still a very well crafted haiku- you are like the fairytale- spinning gold from straw. xoxox

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/25/2011 6:42:00 PM

Beautiful expressions with images, mourning

Nebeolisa Okwudili

Date: 6/25/2011 4:56:00 PM

Beautiful poem, and creative.