Comments On Insane Cause Pain

Morning comes again,
Hear betrayal sing its' tune,
Insanity pain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Breidenthal Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 3:28 PM
Interesting.....
Macmillan Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 8:54 PM
I've missed church for a few weeks. I am going tomorrow. We collect prayers there. I am going to write down, "Please pray for my sister, Dawn, that the pain she is suffering ease and that joy again be restored." Is that okay? I would like to do that for you...love you...thinking about you and giving you a big sis hug. One of those bone crushers. By the way, though I know this is about pain, its still a very well crafted haiku- you are like the fairytale- spinning gold from straw. xoxox
Mehta Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 6:42 PM
Beautiful expressions with images, mourning
Okwudili Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 4:56 PM
Beautiful poem, and creative.
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