Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Rhyme

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Some comments from famous senior poets,
Few giggles from my younger poets,
And the day goes bright and is done,
And seems the whole world I have won !

And surprisingly a sweet tribute,
Leaves me wordless and mute,
Wow Heavens is this poetry soup,
Never knew existed such an amazing group,

Such a spirit of positive comments,
Creative learning and joyous moments,
Though never got some negative ones, 
But really am scared of shots and guns,

Sensitivity and emotions thy name is poet,
Negative comments are certain to cause hurt,
Why sadden someone at the end of the day,
If can't be positive, keep your words at bay!



August 20th, 2014
For contest 'Comments' by Jack Horne 

Awarded 1st place

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Verlena S. Walker August 29, 2014 at 4:29 PM That's on the up and up Upma... Congrats on a top win! Verlena

Jan Allison August 20, 2014 at 6:12 AM I hope this makes poem of the week Dr Sharma!!!! the final line speaks volumes:-) Good luck in the contest POEM OF THE WEEK NEXT WEEK PLEASE Hugs Jan xxxx

Eileen Manassian August 20, 2014 at 5:19 AM Oh....that last line is just pure magic, Dr Upma...YES YES YES! Amen to that. Hugs! Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 20, 2014 at 5:45 AM Thnx Eileen ! Love to hv ur remarks always my dear!

Carolyn Devonshire August 20, 2014 at 5:07 AM Dear Dr. Upma, I'm so glad you have received uplifting and supportive comments. Your last verse should be on the home page of Poetry Soup. This is supposed to be a site for learning, sharing and growth. As my mother said, "If you have nothing good to say, say nothing at all." Wishing you success in the contest with this wonderful write! Love, Carolyn Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 20, 2014 at 5:44 AM Yes true that's what the cover page of the site says, being critical is all right till it doesn't hurt the other person, n a big no to derogatory remarks of course ! Glad u hv liked , thnx for ur kind visit n words Carolyn!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 20, 2014 at 4:03 AM - Anyone who has anything negative to say about a poem ....... should close his mouth - .... a "poet" without comments .... is like a garden without flowers :) - Enjoy reading, Dr. Upma! - Good luck in the contest! - Have a great Wednesday :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 20, 2014 at 6:16 AM Yes I know u r such a delight to make friends with! Ur comments r always lovely n encouraging! Be sure I was just elaborating my dear! I didn't at all misconstrue ! Anne-Lise Andresen August 20, 2014 at 5:56 AM - I will always do my best to spread positive and joyful comment - Your comments are always a pleasure to receive Dr. Upma !!! - (But, I know there are people here who are "hurting" .... with negative and bad words. ... it is such people who should "close their mouths")- Hope you do not misunderstand me :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 20, 2014 at 5:48 AM With God's grace till date I hv never hurt anyone wid my words, I m not at all a critique , everyone is unique in his own thinking ways n I respect that, coz positivity- negativity and right and wrong are all relative terms, they really can't be defined my friend! Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 20, 2014 at 5:42 AM Thnx for visit Anne Lise! I agree that comments can be positive as well as negative, but shud be critical to an extent not to hurt anyone , n that dignity needs to be maintained