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in the darkness of the night
where skin and finger tips our only sight
rubbing noses and our cheeks
passions reaches higher peaks
our universe where we are one with God
our sacred touch
loved, worshiped, laud
bodies explode it's supernova
and rapping limbs fold over and over.
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