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in the darkness of the night where skin and finger tips our only sight rubbing noses and our cheeks passions reaches higher peaks our universe where we are one with God our sacred touch loved, worshiped, laud bodies explode it's supernova and rapping limbs fold over and over.

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Date: 3/24/2010 10:24:00 AM
This is a beautiful expression of your love, John. Passionate, romantic, even spiritual. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/20/2010 4:33:00 PM
Great passionate write..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work....Sara
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Date: 3/17/2010 8:32:00 PM
Wow John, must be love in the air. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/15/2010 12:56:00 AM
passionate and romantic indeed!Charma
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:48:00 PM
enjoyed--sounds passionate
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:45:00 PM
Yup sky rockets in flight! afternoon delight! (many trees too..duck) Light & Love
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Date: 3/14/2010 4:58:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry, today, John iii. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt thoughts with us. And thank you for your recent comments on my work. I always enjoy your fun words! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/14/2010 12:33:00 AM
Lovely feelings
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Date: 3/13/2010 4:50:00 PM
Whew!...I envy you, John! Very fine poem indeed! - Tim
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Date: 3/13/2010 3:53:00 PM
Thankxxx John ..your comment was so special and emotional too.. happy to be your friend and read these lovely lines as your comment to my poetry tonight... have a new blog posted today too if u care to comment and thankxxx if u do so..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/13/2010 2:27:00 PM
explovive!beauty! jamesy
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