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Commendation

Again from the shadows
Rises that scoundrel
Riding on envy
Armed with naked cynics
Dedicated not to betray
The Lord of hatred
For he is ordered
To scoff the adore
Yet he is unsure
About the shine that still hold
Eternal is the nature’s mystery
What comes in its way, becomes history.

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Skat A

Date: 6/5/2015 2:02:00 AM

Shabeeh, this is not a haiku. Noticed it was on the haiku list. Perhaps a free verse poem

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2015 12:04:00 AM

Shabeeh, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/3/2015 12:40:00 PM

- Congratulations on your first poems here at P-Soup - A pleasure to welcome you, Shabeeh :) - Hope you will find this page interesting and post many more thoughts and words in the future - Good luck :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 6/2/2015 10:05:00 PM

Nice verse Shabeeh, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Neva Romaine

Date: 6/2/2015 3:35:00 PM

Hey Shabeeh, a warm welcome to Poetry Soup. A deep and mysterious piece from you. Do brush up on your poetry forms though - this is not haiku - but please keep trying. Be Blessed, Neva