Commanded Demands

Verily, verily I say onto you.
Watch me pass right through.
 
That which is of dust and sand,
Knew not of my helping hand!
 
That which is of stone and clay,
Knew not of my night and day!
 
Shew thyself away from the dust!
Put on clean garments of the just!
 
Shew thyself away from the stone!
Put on armor protecting thy bone!
 
That which has been made of a particular brand,
Henceforth, are made from commanded demands!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 12:13 PM
I get the feeling this is deep and I am missing something here. Keep writing. Sara
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Yes I get your drift, very spiffy,Sincerely Moses
Moreno Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Love the 5th stanza, nice work Ann...Raul
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