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Coming Too Soon

COMING TOO SOON by H.B.Ussach Popping up like pre-fab stucco-concrete-aluminum posies, Poking up on parking lots as donut shops and quick lubes, They are plain, utilitarian, proletarian low-low-price bunkers On a retail war-weary land.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2013 1:12:00 PM

Congratulations!!! Harvey --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA <

Skat A

Date: 10/15/2013 8:55:00 PM

Harvey, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/15/2013 1:35:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Harvey! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 10/14/2013 8:39:00 PM

Nice poem and Welcome to Poetry Soup

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/14/2013 5:42:00 PM

great poem, Harvey, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@