Coming or Going is up to Her

oh good, the lights are on, the McHenry family cheered
they loved visiting Auntie Mable
As they approached the door she came out wearing a coat
Oh, dear, she told them. I have concert tickets. I was just leaving.
They left, disappointed because she baked the best cookies.

Ten minutes later old Mister Groggins showed up
noting the lights were on.
Good, he thought, because Mable was his favorite listener.
As he was about to knock the door opened.
Mable said “Come in, come in, I was just coming home from the store.”

Mable keeps her coat next to the front door on a hook.
Depending upon who knocks,, she can say she is either coming or going.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 10:11 AM
Hello Caren, yes Mable can say whether she is coming or going. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 4:03 PM
Hello Caren, LOL Hugs. / Darlene/
Marie Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 10:56 AM
Lol
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