Coming of Age

He was 11 when his first scars began to appear
In the beginning his scars were small and not very deep
Originating at school his hazing began
This boy was bullied
He was changing and his friends didn't like it
They teased him
He was a twig and had a squeaky voice
He had no one to help him
So he turned to the blade
 
He cut daily to escape the emotional pain
His body continued changing
His scars became deeper 
He couldn't handle becoming a man
He couldn't handle the stress in coming of age
 
As he developed he gained responsibilities
The world expected more from him
he wishes he could go back to the boy of his youth but knows he can't 
His body growing bigger
His shoulders broaden
The weight in becoming a man is heavy
He wants to stay this little boy
The thought of being a man terrifies him
 
Now has mood swings 
He's not happy all the time like he used to be
He angers easily and
Wish to remain that little boy
Then he realizes
 
He must learn who he is as an individual
He must endure the changes
He must push on
Listen to advice
Stay fit
Be patient
These scars are symbolic
A badge of honor
Decorating your self-identity
Transforming you into the man you wish to become.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/29/2014 10:58:00 PM
Nathan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/18/2014 9:34:00 AM
BRAVO! I loved this... Keep writting! Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on avatars and names to read others poems. Leave a comment and they will have a permanent link back to yours.
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Date: 11/17/2014 12:09:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Nathan - I choose your first great bio poem - Well done :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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