Bobby May Poet Free verse

Coming In Last Place

I would rather come in last
For it would gave another the win
I have placed my ego behind me
For I do not need to win

Winning to me is just to see
Your comment to me
That is a win
I would rather be last then

Not have your comment within

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Alexis Y. January 3, 2019 at 11:42 AM Hi Bobby, I agree, when we get comments that inspire, uplift, encourage or just to say hello is most definitely a win. I enjoyed your words written from the heart my friend:-) Alexis Bobby May January 3, 2019 at 11:59 AM Thank You my friend very much for your kind words

Gershon Wolf January 2, 2019 at 12:24 PM Nice, selfless sentiment. In this era of arrogance, nice to see a little true humility. Best wishes, Gershon Bobby May January 2, 2019 at 12:45 PM Thank you Gershon my sweet mother taught me that

Nette Onclaud January 2, 2019 at 7:44 AM to be acknowledged by friends in poetry is truly meaningful... inspiring read, bobby!..huggs Bobby May January 2, 2019 at 8:07 AM Thank you Nette, I try to read every ones poetry but WOW! there so much to read, Happy New Year

Phil Capitano January 2, 2019 at 7:27 AM Comments fill the belly when the cupboard is bare. Good one Bobby. Bobby May January 2, 2019 at 8:05 AM I know Phil, comments are great that's what keeps me writing are people like you my friend