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Coming In Last Place

I would rather come in last For it would gave another the win I have placed my ego behind me For I do not need to win Winning to me is just to see Your comment to me That is a win I would rather be last then Not have your comment within

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Alexis Y.

Date: 1/3/2019 11:42:00 AM

Hi Bobby, I agree, when we get comments that inspire, uplift, encourage or just to say hello is most definitely a win. I enjoyed your words written from the heart my friend:-) Alexis

Bobby May
Date: 1/3/2019 11:59:00 AM

Thank You my friend very much for your kind words

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/2/2019 12:24:00 PM

Nice, selfless sentiment. In this era of arrogance, nice to see a little true humility. Best wishes, Gershon

Bobby May
Date: 1/2/2019 12:45:00 PM

Thank you Gershon my sweet mother taught me that

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/2/2019 7:44:00 AM

to be acknowledged by friends in poetry is truly meaningful... inspiring read, bobby!..huggs

Bobby May
Date: 1/2/2019 8:07:00 AM

Thank you Nette, I try to read every ones poetry but WOW! there so much to read, Happy New Year

Phil Capitano

Date: 1/2/2019 7:27:00 AM

Comments fill the belly when the cupboard is bare. Good one Bobby.

Bobby May
Date: 1/2/2019 8:05:00 AM

I know Phil, comments are great that's what keeps me writing are people like you my friend