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The flight controller solemnly guides another aircraft in-bound. The plane safely lands, smoking tires delicately kiss the ground. The pilot reverently tells the tower he has twenty-one souls aboard. Alas, his passengers lie in flag-draped coffins, 'tis sad to record. Misty eyes are seen upon the faces of the honor guard here and there, As they handle the coffins of their brothers with tender, loving care. Chaplains intone quiet words of comfort, leading a final parade, To honor them with lasting tribute for their righteous crusade. Brave American heroes, who sacrificed all upon the field of strife, Now safely sheltered in the arms of God, who promised eternal life. Tho' they gallantly performed their duty with honor and dedication, Sadly, they won't parade or hear the acclaim of a grateful nation. Brave patriots will be borne to their rest in hallowed ground, To await the clarion call of Gabriel's triumphant sound. Honor guards will fire the gun salute upon the sergeant's command. The plaintive tones of "Taps" will echo throughout the land. Tho' twenty-one American families' lives will be changed forever, They take comfort knowing that their sons died for freedom's endeavor. They placed the destiny of their country above their very own, To ensure that our hard-won liberties will ne'er be overthrown! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 2 in Constance's "Scavenger Hunt" Contest - August 2010

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Date: 11/24/2010 4:19:00 PM
Terrific, Bob - thanks for pointing me to this poem. Sad, that our liberties are won and maintained at such a high price. I love the rhyme and meter of your poems - much the same style that I write in. I personally think it takes more talent and thought to get a story told in such a manner as oppossed to some of the "artistic" styles that does so without meter and rhyme - but, hey, that's just me. Your poems are easy to read and understand - which I really like. Joe
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Date: 8/15/2010 11:38:00 AM
It's so nice to share the second spot with you, Bob. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:50:00 AM
My congratulations Robert to you on your win in Constance ~ A Rambling Poet's contest "Scavenger Hunt". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations Bob on your #2 win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:25:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your big win in the Scavenger Hunt contest with this amazing and awesome piece from your gifted pen to thrill us all.. enjoy this happy Sunday.. in Italy ..yeah....luv..
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Date: 8/14/2010 9:27:00 PM
Congrats for the second place win, Bob
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Date: 2/20/2010 4:36:00 PM
Can't stay a thing, I am choked. Very well written, Robert, a beautiful dedication. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/20/2010 12:20:00 PM
This should be published for all to read...What a heart rendering poem..good work. BG
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Date: 2/20/2010 10:14:00 AM
The solemnity is captured so well; your poem brought tears to my eyes. We have all seen photos of the flag-draped coffins being unloaded from the aircraft. Like to think these souls will be looking down from heaven to view the "acclaim of a grateful nation." We owe them our freedom. God bless you for serving our nation with such distinction and class. Love, Carolyn
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