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Coming Closer

Its coming closer…and closer… I’m frozen My legs are like jelly. Its legs – long legs 8 of them Black, thick, and hairy. Beady little eyes Tiny, sharp fangs Vemenous And ever-approaching. Panic, as it glares at me with conviction. I have the urge to squash it. Its coming closer…and closer…. BAM. Extermination.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/3/2024 1:19:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2016 8:57:00 PM

Amy, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/23/2012 12:09:00 PM

Funny poem,and wery vell done.Welcom to PSoup and welcome to post comments on mine poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2012 11:30:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

John Rhinem

Date: 2/21/2012 7:51:00 AM

Smile ˜ I kind of looking forward unto getting Closer unto a few Certains myself - Great poe - Love, John!:) *