Comical Movie--Dumb and Dumber

comical movie
had me laughing in stitches 
crazy versus crazier

kookie zany men
driving across the country
short on common sense

a bag of money
returning to the owner
brings total chaos
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Sweetheart Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 10:12 AM
sounds like total fun Phyl .. but I cannot sit thru an entire movie but luv to laugh and u made me today luv..
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 10:42 AM
Phyllis, I kind of remember this movie. I too love to laugh! And this kind of movie can sure deliver. I enjoyed this. Thanks so much for commenting at my blog. soupmail for ya.
Squyres Avatar
January 7, 2012 at 6:28 AM
A very funny movie...enjoyed your poetic take on it .
Babcock Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 10:19 AM
my fav comedy of all time
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 9:43 PM
jim carey had me in stitches here, phyllis.. love your poetic treatment with winning huggs!
Babcock Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 10:20 AM
when I am down and need a laugh I watch the movie and laugh.
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Reads like an interesting movie..If for the contest, reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..My husband bought Crepe Myrtle to replace the destroyed Red-Tip..Sara..I hope that this is the best year of your life up to this point..May God's richest blessings flow to your home..
Babcock Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 10:21 AM
I will have to see what crepe myrtle looks like. It is a spreading flowering plant? Thank you for your blessings. love phyl
Poet Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 6:53 AM
Enjoyed this Senryu Phyllis.Wish you a very very happy New Year.
Babcock Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 10:22 AM
Thanks Kash this is my fav. comedy and great for a laugh.
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