Comfy Cozy

Come over here, my sweetie pie.
Tell your honey what’s wrong.
I sense you're sad, but this is me.
You don’t have to act so strong.

I’ve been down here in the kitchen
Just waiting for you, honey ‘chile.
Come here and take a load off.
Stay with me, babe, for a while.

I’m having a midnight snack;
Hot cocoa with whipping cream.
Why don’t you join me, Sugar?
Please sit and chat with me.

I know you are feeling downhearted.
But I’m happy you finally came down.
Let me fix you a bit to eat,
For I so hate to see you frown.

If you’d rather, just lay your head on my lap.
Tell mama your every woe.
Go ahead, Sweetheart, let it out.
Let those demons just go.

Are you feeling better now, darling?
I see you are eyeing that cake!
Insomnia got us both, but now
I’m enjoying being awake.

Now that you finally came out of your shell
And shared what was making you blue,
I could stay up all night until dawn, dear,
As long as I stayed here with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/26/2014 12:22:00 PM
Full of love and well penned....loved it. Congratulation
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Date: 6/25/2014 12:35:00 PM
Well, dumplin britches, this one makes me all warm and fuzzy!.. Lol.. Congrats my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/25/2014 5:13:00 AM
Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,
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Date: 6/25/2014 4:34:00 AM
This sure is a sweety pie; I have to go down to the kitchen more often at night! Congrats on your win, Andrea. // paul
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Date: 6/24/2014 8:43:00 PM
ANDREA.. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 2/10/2014 11:06:00 PM
Andrea Such a charming and wonderful write. Full of love, passion, caring, romance, delight and fun. Nicely done Thanks for the sweet comment on my Cleaned Out Heart poem
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Date: 12/16/2012 5:56:00 AM
Wow i wish!!!!!!!
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Date: 2/13/2011 4:47:00 AM
Yes this is really a warm embrace from your pen Andrea.Love it--kash
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Date: 6/15/2010 5:27:00 PM
a very warm embrace indeed.......well done!
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Date: 6/15/2010 7:31:00 AM
Lovely poem, enjoyed by Simone
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Date: 6/13/2010 4:40:00 PM
This is so loving Andrea! yes, I haven't posted lately, been unusually busy, but life is back to normal now! Thanks for the kind words! Jeralynn
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Date: 6/12/2010 8:22:00 PM
so very sweeton so many levels from a dear sweet woman! Light & Love
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:09:00 PM
Beautiful warm loving so real and alive. Thank you, chuck
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Date: 6/11/2010 11:48:00 PM
Aww. That's such a sweet poem. i really enjoyed this...love nikki
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Date: 6/10/2010 2:27:00 PM
What a wonderful poem. It reminds me so much of when I was growing up. What a wonderful read. Keep up the good work. ~Misty~
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Date: 6/10/2010 12:17:00 AM
Sweet words indeed Andrea.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/9/2010 11:39:00 PM
What a loving sweetheart is Our Andrea,what a gem to this site you are,how i wish to have more time and read more of you and some other talented friends here.Hope you are fine Andy!great poem going tmfs!Celene(and when i have some time i come and read your other gems and blogs)
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Date: 6/9/2010 10:59:00 AM
Dera Andrea: Love this poem. Have a wonderful and Cozy day. peace: Sheol
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Date: 6/9/2010 5:37:00 AM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck...This is just like a mom to try to comfort her hurting lamb...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreicate you doing that...Sara
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Date: 6/9/2010 1:56:00 AM
In this case, insomnia was a blessing, Andrea. Lovely entry for the contest and I wish you success. As for "Christina's World," Christina Olson did suffer from muscular degeneration. I learned that in the store when my mother bought the photo for my room and then reconfirmed it on the internet before posting the poem. Andrew Wyeth is a great painter! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2010 1:03:00 AM
Hi Andrea :)--your poem sure kept me comfy cozy up to my tippy toes ;) This is really sweet Andrea, can't help but imagine you telling this to Joe...should do very well in the contest (boohoo I missed this one)--btw just one typo for "you're" L3S1--have a good day now--nikko :)
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Date: 6/8/2010 10:36:00 PM
Much more tasty and enjoyable than " counting sheep " and should be in the winners kitchen ; sorry , that should be circle !!!. Best of luck in the contest ......
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Date: 6/8/2010 10:13:00 PM
Good luck Andrea, I like the sweetness of this poem......Karla
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Date: 6/8/2010 9:29:00 PM
Well I thought it was aMommy or Grandma talking to her child, but then that's me. Anyway it is very sweet. In answer to your question for we Lutherans it comes on the first Sunday in November. Red candles for the newly come, White candles for the lately dead. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/8/2010 9:23:00 PM
Thankxxx Andrea.. appreciate the critique.. and its the damn New York accent mixed with the Jersey overtone plus the Philly spin .. a language all its own in core and allure .. procure and the word for the second line rhymes... well its only a contest ... and its only FUN... so we shall see... nite nite..luv..
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