Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

- Comfortably Numb Feelings -

Oh now sad frog located on the sandy beach
Emotions raging around the body as an Icelandic volcano
burning holds in a vice grips deeply 
Stranded in the cemetery of broken hearts
It is as if parts of the heart where torn out
shreaded from the body without an anesthesia
Deep arrow strikes in Golden Sunshine beams
Maybe he worries for no reason
Warm thoughts sail faraway yonder
An endless sandy beach, white as snow
washed with the blue ocean in brilliant yellow sunlight
Singing dreams kissing lips hold an oasis close
She drinks his kiss as if one could never get enough
In the hot summer sun burning heart yearns


It does not matter what it is 
or where it leads them
as long as it creates an inner glow
Singing sizzles relighting loves croaking flames
Infatuation may be coming - but volatile
ignites when paper lips hold tears prisoner 
Positively resonated does not appear out of the blue
Falling salt seasoned spice
Trail seeking light
This is a powerful and invigorating moment
Jumping angry to paradise
Shedding the green shirt of a Queen
She was cold, but the sun stroked her
soft and warm over the cheeks



Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  26.06.2015 
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 9, 2015 at 9:01 AM Liam, I commented already to Anne Lise and like I said this just a splendid poem which my eyes and imagination can feast on!!~Olive ELoisa =")

Debbie Guzzi July 7, 2015 at 10:13 AM Lots of luciuos imagery here fav line [when paper lips hold tears prisoner] Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen July 6, 2015 at 1:27 PM - Love it !!!! - I wish you a beautiful "summer" day, dear friend Liam! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud July 6, 2015 at 4:39 AM lovely storytelling from both of you with an ending that delights!.. huggs

Dorian Petersen Potter July 5, 2015 at 6:27 PM Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!A very beautifully written free verse poem by you my dearest friends.I sense a lot of sadness in this excellent piece,but well that could be only me and my own personal interpretation of it.Great imagery.Just dazzling.A very beautiful n' amazing poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.A real gem!Awesome collaboration!Enjoyed it.A 7+++ to each of you!Your pens are truly mighty golden.Wishing you a very lovely day!Keep your faith Liam!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Jan Allison July 5, 2015 at 6:09 PM what wonderful imagery Anne Lise and Liam - I just hope he doesn't get too dry in the sun and croak lol:-) love the title a great Pink Floyd track too:-) hugs Jan xx 7