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Comfortable Kitty

Soft meow's 
silent footsteps 
"cautious"
as her tail wags 
swaying back and forth  
quiet purrs 
muttered 
rising hairs 
lay down 
when petted 
lap cuddling 
body rubs- galore 
feeling comfortably 
"loved" 
she stretches her paws  


Writing Challenge - Yalto Form - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Constance La France 
12/7/2022

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Date: 1/2/2023 1:34:00 PM
Charlie, a purrectly penned Yalto poem! And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, Constance
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Date: 12/20/2022 10:58:00 AM
- A pleasant life as a cat ... enjoy every second ... without worries :) - Congratulations on your win, Charlie :) - I wish you a Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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Date: 12/20/2022 8:41:00 AM
Back to say congratulations. Sara
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Date: 12/20/2022 1:18:00 AM
Great narration on this special form. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/19/2022 4:38:00 PM
Cute, wonderful Yalto, Charles:-) It brought a smile to my face. Write more, my friend. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/12/2022 5:05:00 PM
You've got a top winner here, Charlie - good luck in the contest. You describe my dear old cat Jeff precisely - he is a great companion. I wish for you and your family a Joyous Christmas Season and a profitable, healthy New Year - Bob
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Date: 12/7/2022 8:40:00 PM
Charles, that comes very close to making me like cats ! Slow and slinky, and oh so comfortable. Yes I love it ! Your poem that is .. not cats.
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Date: 12/7/2022 12:49:00 PM
awww nice one Charles..
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Date: 12/7/2022 8:09:00 AM
They're cute Charlie and very independent you don't have to walk them lol. Tom
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Date: 12/7/2022 3:52:00 AM
Ahh!! Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 12/7/2022 3:36:00 AM
Perfect description. Loved it.
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