Charles Messina Poet Verse

Comfortable Kitty

Soft meow's 
silent footsteps 
"cautious"
as her tail wags 
swaying back and forth  
quiet purrs 
muttered 
rising hairs 
lay down 
when petted 
lap cuddling 
body rubs- galore 
feeling comfortably 
"loved" 
she stretches her paws  


Writing Challenge - Yalto Form - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Constance La France 
12/7/2022

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Constance La France January 2, 2023 at 1:34 PM Charlie, a purrectly penned Yalto poem! And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen December 20, 2022 at 10:58 AM - A pleasant life as a cat ... enjoy every second ... without worries :) - Congratulations on your win, Charlie :) - I wish you a Merry Christmas :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick December 20, 2022 at 8:41 AM Back to say congratulations. Sara

Christuraj Alex December 20, 2022 at 1:18 AM Great narration on this special form. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh December 19, 2022 at 4:38 PM Cute, wonderful Yalto, Charles:-) It brought a smile to my face. Write more, my friend. Congratulations on your win!

Robert L. Hinshaw December 12, 2022 at 5:05 PM You've got a top winner here, Charlie - good luck in the contest. You describe my dear old cat Jeff precisely - he is a great companion. I wish for you and your family a Joyous Christmas Season and a profitable, healthy New Year - Bob

Speaks Volumes December 7, 2022 at 8:40 PM Charles, that comes very close to making me like cats ! Slow and slinky, and oh so comfortable. Yes I love it ! Your poem that is .. not cats.

Silent One December 7, 2022 at 12:49 PM awww nice one Charles..

Tom Cunningham December 7, 2022 at 8:09 AM They're cute Charlie and very independent you don't have to walk them lol. Tom

Sara Kendrick December 7, 2022 at 3:52 AM Ahh!! Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara

Victor Buhagiar December 7, 2022 at 3:36 AM Perfect description. Loved it.