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Comfort Me

I am descending from utopia Comfort me with your confrontations… Be my scar and be my lovely flaw Facing so many sympathetic sensations… I am ascending from dystopia Be my shadow and roof over my weary head… My emotions inside me are deep and raw I’m filled up with dread and need happiness instead

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Date: 12/28/2018 12:19:00 PM
'...descending from utopia... ascending from dystopia...' I like this subtle, but quite palpable, change in tone. Nice write.
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