Comfort

¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ my darling,
Into the hidden,
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ I
Am wonder-ridden.

¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ the shadows tell
Me things, and silences toss
Me their drift.

You sent me ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ fire
Out of death, and it burns in the draught
Of the breathing ¦¦¦¦¦¦
Kindles the darkening pyre
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ sorrowful, ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦

Form after form, in the streets
¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦
Kindled to me;
The star above the house-top greets
Me every eve with a long
Song fierily.

¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ the town
Glimmers with subtle ghosts
¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦

¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ bereaved of you,
My little love.
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ but the dream shows through
As they move.


(Blackout of The Inheritance by D. H. Lawrence)
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Buhagiar Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 10:47 PM
To black out parts of a poem changes its meaning. You did very well.
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August 2, 2026 at 11:57 PM
Hi Evelyn I loved reading your blackout poetry . I've not gave it a go yet but I must try ~ think games section is getting popular as ppl get used to it ✍️🌸 it is a great section. I love this site and love being part of soup family. Have a blessed 🙌 week 🙏 hugs 🌹
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August 3, 2026 at 12:20 PM
Hi Dorothy, welcome to Poetry Soup! It is a wonderful, talented community, that I'm sure you'll enjoy.✍️The more I participate in the games section, the more I want to. It's fun!😊 Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation, which brings smiles.😄🌸 Very best wishes.⭐
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