Comets in Night Sky - Hiku 13
Written: June 1st, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand
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s i l v e r c
\
o
\
m
\
e
\
t
\
s
\|/\|/ r~u~s~h~
* * *
fractured l*i*g*h*t in end~
~less d a
r k~
whispers of
l~o~s~t
s*t*a*r*s
C~r~i~m~s~o~n
d
*
a
*
w
*
n i *|g*|n*|i*|t*|e*|s*| \|/\|/
* * *
f c
i r s~p~i~l~l~s across s i l l o
e e n t u d
s
n/i/g/h/t f ~ a ~ d ~ e ~ s into gold
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