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‘neath piles of blankets crying herself to sleep she rocks ever so gently in maternal arms her loss too much to take in shock she rocks so gently in maternal arms ‘neath piles of blankets crying herself to sleep AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on January 23, 2019

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Date: 1/24/2019 3:35:00 PM
So well written I feel like crying too.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/24/2019 8:43:00 PM
LOL don't cry, Timothy.
Date: 1/23/2019 5:40:00 PM
Painfully sad but well penned.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 7:23:00 PM
Thank you, ML. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/23/2019 7:09:00 AM
Grief expressed in the way of a beautifully telling missive, my friend. Nicely done.
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Date: 1/23/2019 10:05:00 AM
Thanks, Caren, for your much appreciated visit and comment.