Notes About The Poem

Comes in waves

Grief is a dark tsunami
I’m drowning in my bubble of hurt
Love’s loss being all consuming



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:48 PM
the tsunami image is perfect.
Gauthier Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:53 PM
Thank, Sara ~ much appreciated
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