Comely Saracen

Veiled beauty so homely, so chaste
Purging-black your crown doth baste
Cloistered mantle throttles your solemn waste
Erudite cloak exhibits subtle, stolid taste

Sensual nature appealingly encased
Your virtue, fealty cannot be effaced
All pageantry and style have been erased
Remaining, intrinsic qualities meekly showcased

Outwardly modest; inwardly circumspect
Physical qualities restrained, derelict
Bearing your social stigma without respect
For the fashion police; who your sublimity reject

Bridled maiden so simple, so plain
Retract your temporal, flowing mane
Reveal your fair, pale grain
Your passion, honor no longer restrain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 12, 2010 at 6:01 PM
Interesting and unique write Stephen.. deeply intense ..luv your title so much... your lines and phrases create a story beautiful luv.. enjoyed this read and your warm comments as well... happy weekend with luv..
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