Doris Culverhouse Poet Haiku

Comedian Oak

bare ash trees
shiver in the breeze
oak tree laughs


.        \ \/         \/ /
          \   \     /  / ___/  
      ___    \   /    ____  \ 
     /     \    \/  /          \
            \      /
             l     l
             l     l 
             l     l
______/       \____

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Sidney Hall Mad Poet October 15, 2010 at 3:00 PM Bare Ass Ash? Sorry I read it wrong. love it D and you are funny too. :-)

Sara Kendrick October 4, 2010 at 11:56 AM I thought that I commented on this one before...I enjoyed the humor and little bit of naughtyness...thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Mom

Gert W. Knop October 3, 2010 at 8:52 AM Good job, Doris! Both the Haiku and the drawing! Thank you for your kind comments and have agreat week!...Gert

Matthew Anish October 2, 2010 at 7:54 PM Like the poem and the artwork. Keep 'em coming Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 1, 2010 at 12:55 PM Well Doris u have certainly captured the essence of Fall in your lines here luv... and the design is so cute too.. my friend.. hope u enjoy a happy weekend..

Poet Destroyer A October 1, 2010 at 11:25 AM Smiles and very clever, Doris,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2010 at 11:12 AM This is charming poetry with the little picture included, Doris. Great title, And NO, I have not been to ATlanta lately. IN that poem I wrote, it was the only time I ever gave someone the finger. haha. Boy she pissed me off how she almost killed me for nothing!

Michael J. Falotico October 1, 2010 at 10:29 AM A beautiful image you have shared with us today..very enjoyed, Love Michael

Ralph Taylor October 1, 2010 at 7:55 AM Get out your rake, Doris. Great Haiku and drawing. Thanks for reading my silliness. You talked me out of the lawsuit you silver-tongued devil! Have a real super weekend. xxxRalph

Francine Roberts October 1, 2010 at 7:39 AM cute haiku, love your tree