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Comedian Oak

bare ash trees shiver in the breeze oak tree laughs . \ \/ \/ / \ \ / / ___/ ___ \ / ____ \ / \ \/ / \ \ / l l l l l l ______/ \____

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Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/15/2010 3:00:00 PM

Bare Ass Ash? Sorry I read it wrong. love it D and you are funny too. :-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2010 11:56:00 AM

I thought that I commented on this one before...I enjoyed the humor and little bit of naughtyness...thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Mom

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/3/2010 8:52:00 AM

Good job, Doris! Both the Haiku and the drawing! Thank you for your kind comments and have agreat week!...Gert

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/2/2010 7:54:00 PM

Like the poem and the artwork. Keep 'em coming Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/1/2010 12:55:00 PM

Well Doris u have certainly captured the essence of Fall in your lines here luv... and the design is so cute too.. my friend.. hope u enjoy a happy weekend..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/1/2010 11:25:00 AM

Smiles and very clever, Doris,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2010 11:12:00 AM

This is charming poetry with the little picture included, Doris. Great title, And NO, I have not been to ATlanta lately. IN that poem I wrote, it was the only time I ever gave someone the finger. haha. Boy she pissed me off how she almost killed me for nothing!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/1/2010 10:29:00 AM

A beautiful image you have shared with us today..very enjoyed, Love Michael

Ralph Taylor

Date: 10/1/2010 7:55:00 AM

Get out your rake, Doris. Great Haiku and drawing. Thanks for reading my silliness. You talked me out of the lawsuit you silver-tongued devil! Have a real super weekend. xxxRalph

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/1/2010 7:39:00 AM

cute haiku, love your tree