Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Free verse

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Come With Me My Love - the Egg Timer Style

~Come  With   Me   My  Love~
( Egg  Timer )


Come with me my love
We'll dance away 
Neath the moon
All night
Long
Long
All night
Neath  the moon
We'll dance  away
Come with me my love

And  hold me so tight
Give me a kiss
Two  three  four
I  want
More
More
I want
Two  three  four
Give me   a  kiss 
And  hold  me  so tight

Come with me Darling
And hold my hand
always walk
With me
Love
Love
With me
Always  walk
And hold my hand
Come with me  Darling.


Dorian  Petersen  Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2016


May.31.2017


“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain 


~ Author's   Notes:

The  "Egg Timer" is   a  poetry form or style created by Erich J.  Goller.

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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon May 31, 2017 at 5:16 PM I see creativity crying aloud, Dorian. A 7, without doubt. Dorian Petersen Potter May 31, 2017 at 9:21 PM Thank you ever so kindly Adeniji, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.And for the fantastic 7:)Deeply appreciated all :))Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light God bless you!:)D

Chris Green May 31, 2017 at 5:00 PM This was beautiful, one of the best poems in this form I have seen. Wonderfully done my friend. Dorian Petersen Potter May 31, 2017 at 9:16 PM Hi Chris!:)Thank you ever so kindly, for stopping by again and commenting so beautifully here on my love poem. I'm so happy that you liked this one Chris:)I deeply appreciate it all my friend:)) Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))D