John Loving Iii Poet I do not know?

Come What May "end Line Word"

.                                                           come what MAY
                                          good things come from GOD
          we may not know his method or way He will BLESS
  perhaps he'll save you from trouble or give a gift to YOU
despite what you did, where you were; God knows WHERE
                           if you say a prayer He will listen to YOU
             you can call out to God no matter where you ARE

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Phyllis Babcock March 17, 2010 at 9:05 PM We can always trust in God. Great end line write. God Bless Phyl

June Ellen Smith February 19, 2010 at 5:24 PM Beautiful write and excellent end line. Thanks for the advice and comments. I have no qualms about being honest. Always, Ellen

Caroline Cécile Delacroix February 18, 2010 at 9:07 PM Absolutely true, John. In God we can always trust. Let's hope in turn that we can be people whom God can also trust. An inspiring write for this new form. I wrote one in this form too, "When I see your face,..." It is based on my favorite quote in the bible, based on what Jacob says to his brother, Esau. Best wishes, Caroline.

June Ellen Smith February 18, 2010 at 4:22 PM I once called out to God loudly in the middle of my cul de sac, many many years ago for help and I know He heard me. Ellen

Debbie Guzzi February 16, 2010 at 6:01 PM The thought of this is very comforting, very! Thank you John. Light & Love

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire February 14, 2010 at 10:23 PM Dear John , Such Beauty in the WORDS of a Great POET I do hope YOU entered this in Dane-Ann's Contest " End Line Word " Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments and YOUR Support in Establishing " End Line Word " YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Sara Kendrick February 12, 2010 at 2:21 PM Great end line write. Where we are is the only place that we can start. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 12, 2010 at 5:20 AM Great job John on the End Line Word new form of poetry ... a poignant saying and inspirational lines for the reader.. hope u entered this one in Dane Ann's contest ... thankxxx for your loving support and special comments on my poetry also.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup

Maya Kaabour February 11, 2010 at 4:19 PM True.... God will always be there for us when the world has let us down. This write is simple yet it conveys a profound message... Thanks for the great write. Love, Maya =)

Debbie Guzzi February 11, 2010 at 1:58 PM A hopefull message! Thanks John for reading my verses and always helping me stay on the straight and narrow. We don't always agree but I do enjoy your input!! and your sense of humor Light & Love

Charmaine Chircop February 11, 2010 at 1:17 PM Thanks for your blessings dear friend,I need so much of them indeed..Good poem indeed..coming from a kind heart..Charma

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire February 11, 2010 at 12:14 PM Dear John, Bravo : A Standing Ovation to a Super, Souper Extremely well done the "End Line Words" meld Very nicely into the Body of the POEM as this Form Calls for Thank-YOU for Support in trying to Establish this Form ; THANK-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments YOUR Poetic Liege ALWAYS...HG