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Come Walk With Me

Take my hand and come with me; oh precious one Through the park we will walk feeling warmth, holding hands... Listening to the songbirds chirping, singing songs of sweet love Lay with me in the soft green grass; looking up Watching the pure white clouds above, shaping two hearts...together Let's watch the warm sun give birth to beautiful flowers Like the garden of Eden, I will blanket you for ever Let the mild breezes of the river comfort us both Melt with me, my heart is yours; now...till eternity Oh precious one; take my hand...come walk with me (Love) 10 lines, 10 words Contest Sponsored by Lu Loo 1-15-2019

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Lawrence Sharp

Date: 1/15/2019 11:05:00 PM

Great write, Charles, very tender and, as always, so charming and endearing.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/15/2019 5:46:00 PM

Your poetry is precious, Thank you for sharing and thank you also for my placement in your contest, I am delighted that you like it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2019 5:41:00 PM

utterly beautiful, charles.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/15/2019 4:27:00 PM

Charles, the poem was amazing, and I adored this part in particular: "Let's watch the warm sun give birth to beautiful flowers Like the garden of Eden, I will blanket you for ever." She is a lucky woman!