Charles Messina Poet Free verse

Come Walk With Me

Take my hand and come with me; oh precious one 
Through the park we will walk feeling warmth, holding hands... 
Listening to the songbirds chirping, singing songs of sweet love 
Lay with me in the soft green grass; looking up 
Watching the pure white clouds above, shaping two hearts...together 
Let's watch the warm sun give birth to beautiful flowers  
Like the garden of Eden, I will blanket you for ever 
Let the mild breezes of the river comfort us both 
Melt with me, my heart is yours; now...till eternity 
Oh precious one; take my hand...come walk with me 



(Love) 

10 lines, 10 words Contest
Sponsored by Lu Loo 
1-15-2019

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Lawrence Sharp January 15, 2019 at 11:05 PM Great write, Charles, very tender and, as always, so charming and endearing.

Mystic Rose Rose January 15, 2019 at 5:46 PM Your poetry is precious, Thank you for sharing and thank you also for my placement in your contest, I am delighted that you like it.

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2019 at 5:41 PM utterly beautiful, charles.

Caren Krutsinger January 15, 2019 at 4:27 PM Charles, the poem was amazing, and I adored this part in particular: "Let's watch the warm sun give birth to beautiful flowers Like the garden of Eden, I will blanket you for ever." She is a lucky woman!