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Come To Me Like the Sunshine

Please come to me as the Sun Showing the horizon and The orientations in my mind Please come to lit the engine of mine And don't let the silence remain I can't move a bit without your presence Come and ignite it to soar or to run If I would be viewed as a car quietly stands

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/7/2019 11:05:00 AM

You are welcome, do drop by for a visit. ;0)

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 8/7/2019 11:20:00 AM

I will. I have added your page in my list of following. Once again, all my best wishes indeed! Sincerely Xuefeng Pan

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/7/2019 8:51:00 AM

What lovely thoughts.

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 8/7/2019 10:40:00 AM

Thanks, Richard! I appreciate your comments! Best wishes for everything. Xuefeng Pan

Ann Foster

Date: 8/4/2019 9:10:00 PM

"orientations in my mind", a compass on the dash, a road map to follow, a reason to race to meet the day. Oh, I loved this one my friend. An excellent write. Ann

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 8/4/2019 10:04:00 PM

Thanks Ann! I have downloaded some of your published books. I like your stories and I will send them to my friends. Honestly speaking, I do see your talents and your great potentials of being a very influential writer! Best wishes to you for everything! Sincerely Xuefeng Pan