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It was an early Christmas present I was so anxious to give it to him It was so soft and luxurious I thought how it would keep him warm With the winter months ahead Turned out he didn’t need it He never saw one flake of snow that year No more walks across the fields To his creek over the bridge he built To the cabin with his woodstove Where he’d percolate fresh coffee And toast bread on its hot surface In a flash it was all delegated to a distant past How I would treasure that snapped photo Of my father’s precious smile As he tried on his new fur hunting hat Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~A SIMPLE MAN~ 2020 AP: 1st place 2020 Posted on February 17, 2020

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Date: 2/18/2020 2:06:00 PM
A special poem Line. Well done :)
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Date: 2/18/2020 8:12:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/18/2020 11:55:00 AM
Oh such poignant memories for you to treasure Line. Beautifully written for it really touched me. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/18/2020 8:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ann. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/18/2020 8:29:00 AM
Well said, a touching memory.
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Date: 2/18/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, DW.
Date: 2/18/2020 8:27:00 AM
This is fantastic Line!
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Date: 2/18/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/18/2020 4:17:00 AM
beautiful memories magical- well done regards Julie
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Date: 2/18/2020 7:56:00 AM
Thanks, Julie. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/18/2020 2:44:00 AM
Too beautiful! What magic you have with your pen. I so admire your gift! Panagiota xx
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Date: 2/18/2020 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, Panagiota. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/18/2020 1:11:00 AM
Sweet lovely poem with flowing words..
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Date: 2/18/2020 7:57:00 AM
Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.

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