Come the Snow

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It was an early Christmas present
I was so anxious to give it to him
It was so soft and luxurious
I thought how it would keep him warm
With the winter months ahead
Turned out he didn’t need it
He never saw one flake of snow that year
No more walks across the fields
To his creek over the bridge he built
To the cabin with his woodstove
Where he’d percolate fresh coffee
And toast bread on its hot surface
In a flash it was all delegated to a distant past
How I would treasure that snapped photo
Of my father’s precious smile
As he tried on his new fur hunting hat    



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~A SIMPLE MAN~ 2020

AP: 1st place 2020

Posted on February 17, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/18/2020 2:06:00 PM
A special poem Line. Well done :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/18/2020 8:12:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/18/2020 11:55:00 AM
Oh such poignant memories for you to treasure Line. Beautifully written for it really touched me. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/18/2020 8:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ann. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/18/2020 8:29:00 AM
Well said, a touching memory.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/18/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, DW.
Date: 2/18/2020 8:27:00 AM
This is fantastic Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/18/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/18/2020 4:17:00 AM
beautiful memories magical- well done regards Julie
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/18/2020 7:56:00 AM
Thanks, Julie. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/18/2020 2:44:00 AM
Too beautiful! What magic you have with your pen. I so admire your gift! Panagiota xx
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Date: 2/18/2020 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, Panagiota. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/18/2020 1:11:00 AM
Sweet lovely poem with flowing words..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/18/2020 7:57:00 AM
Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.
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