Come Take Your Fill

Come fly with me in sweetshop dreams
throw caution’s doubt into the wind
laugh your face to pleasured lines
come board my plain and simple need..
oh let our bodies shed their gloom
see there.. before us distant laid
a flushed horizon’s fading glow 
a green garbed castle in the sky..
all puckered you with mannish frown..   
and doubts a’plenty in your mind
let rich selection fill your wings
come pick and mix all freedom find
sweet doubting heart. Come take your fill
a silk wrapped love here merry brings..

No liqu’rice threads or nougat feel
but more,  a rich confectioned place 
brim-full with honeyed almond strands ..
dark chocolate dipped ripe raspberries
hand held upon your sweetheart’s tongue,
a soaring flight of fancy brought
swirled an' twirled with sherbet fizz
to soon electrify a place,  where is
a melting pot, rich roistering
awaiting weight of other’s sin..
so thus the weekend starts its test
with chocolatiers’s amazing craft
admired is he by others skilled
who knows full well he sells the best..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/15/2018 5:06:00 AM
Am I allowed to be my own reviewer - in which case: perhaps too long, words flung together in an incomprehensible way.. metaphorically ridiculous?!
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