Come Take a Trip With Me

Come take a trip with me it more of a journey
Ride life's hi-way with me the thrills and chills of all the pills
Climb inside my mind after brain surgery when I could hear but not speak;
It was what I would have imagine doing acid or LSD would be 
not being able to speak or walk falling when you tried by yourself but as I got better
I could stand on my own after a week I could walk but talk it took longer and I was 
a BIG TALKER & WRITER but not so much anymore so when I do it is not for the prize 
I do it for me to prove to myself I still can 

Come take a trip with me down my life's hi-way
My road has not been long but fill with lots of big pot holes
First before I was a double digit midget I fell and cut my writing arm
thus forcing me to learn how to write again first pot hole
I was putting up groceries with my brothers and I was hit with a 5lb can of coffee
in the face cutting my nose 5 stitches second pot hole
Riding my horse in a race and was bit by the other horse and again stitches third pot hole
kidnapped in my teens but got away four pot hole
I thought when I got married I broke the curse wrong I flipped a pickup when I was 
pregnant 3 times me and the baby took our first steps together fifth pot hole
Then he want somebody to play with it took 5 years to get a sister six pot hole
His senior year I battled brain cancer I had brain surgery and the took out as much of the tumor as they could now my husband and children are stuck raising me 
I now have cancer low sugar seizures and high blood pressure but it wont be any of theses that get me oh no my kids will be the DEATH of me 
For with love come the greatest pot hole in life at the bottom is the most emotional
ride joy anger hate compassion kindness consideration discipline and wrapped up and sewn together with love so I know 
Even the smallest ants cast a long shadows
I have been gone from the soup for months ands Linda came to look me up and invited me to her blog it was because I had a grand mall and it sucked!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/19/2015 4:56:00 AM
Your honesty in this piece, your passions, and determination, what an inspirational read. These words you've penned here are yet another credit to you.
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Date: 2/16/2015 2:08:00 PM
God bless...you are a fighter just like an ant and it was sweet of Linda to check on you.....:-)
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:59:00 AM
Patricia, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win*** Love **SKAT
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Patricia Bernard
Date: 3/22/2015 11:18:00 PM
Thank you Skat I am one of eight children and I am in the middle so I don't know how to quit
Date: 2/15/2015 4:44:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..A story interwoven with good and bad..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:41:00 AM
WOW Patricia - what a fighter you are my friend - makes my life issues look as tiny as an ants in comparison to yours:-) Hugs jan xx
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