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How Are You Feeling Poetry Contest- Sponsor Seth Pina
Come Se Com Sa - Na-Nu Na-Nu
When I first arrived, everything seemed to be just wonderful
I would never imagine there would be so much beauty here
Everything appears so radiant and colorful
Yet, I have witnessed hatred, here, there and everywhere
I was never taught to hate or lie
And I was never taught to cuss or steal
I often wonder how it feels to cry
Are those tears fake or are they real?
When I arrived, at first, the warm air was welcoming and suffice
All the flowers, the mountains and deep blue seas
Were so picture perfect, everything looked so nice
With all the animals and birds and bees
But I just can't get my mind off of a quite a few things that I saw
Like the wars and the killings that some humans do
So many crimes- all types of people breaking the law
Everything seemed wonderful, well, that just isn't true
So, how do I feel, you asked, so I'll say
When I look up in the sky at the moon and the stars
I feel a little "Come se com sa" today
And I wish that sometimes I could just be back home, on Mars
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