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I was thinking on this scripture while writing this..I John 3:18 My little children, let us not love in word, neither in tongue; but in deed and truth....We can talk it but if we don't do something tangible then it doesn't amount to very much..

Come Ride Into Life's Sunset

Written in response to traveling west on a highway facing the sun setting behind dark gray clouds

Come ride into life's uncertain sunset
Where dark clouds may accumulate with dread
Sun's only peeking through mostly ordained
Giving life those moments when with wingspread

One soars in the presence of the Son's love
Feeling His voice tenderly saying come
Feast at my table of gifts tasty, Dove
Focus your eyes upon my beauty some

Ride to life's sunset whatever circumstance
It may present, hold my hand_understand
This is new ground for me_hope accrescence
In love of mankind for heading to promise land

Uncertain skies streaked with gray, sun at bay
Love can lift, sustain, ingrain us for day!

accrescence means growth, continous growth
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Onclaud Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 7:39 AM
simply divine, sara... your reflections rub on me so well on a sunday blessed by you.. beautiful kind of love.. best wishes and huggs!..:)
Horne Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 7:23 AM
beautiful indeed, Sara
Williams Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 10:43 AM
Sara, I like this, good luck, ...I cannot reply to blogs,,system error..my latest grandson is only 1 week old born in Sydney, Australia, my son and his wife and now child are about to move to Melbourne for his work , 12000 mile gap, so once they have settled in we hope to travel over, his name is Thomas (my father) Garrett (my wife's father) Williams, would have liked to put it on your blog, but couldn't...David
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 10:27 AM
THis is quite uplifting, Sara, and asking for us to be hopeful in spite of the grey. Nicely done!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 10:27 AM
by the way, I am the "young' lady in the drinking story and my pen was writing about me in the third person!
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