Come Ride Into Life's Sunset

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I was thinking on this scripture while writing this..I John 3:18 My little children, let us not love in word, neither in tongue; but in deed and truth....We can talk it but if we don't do something tangible then it doesn't amount to very much..

Written in response to traveling west on a highway facing the sun setting behind dark gray clouds

Come ride into life's uncertain sunset
Where dark clouds may accumulate with dread
Sun's only peeking through mostly ordained
Giving life those moments when with wingspread

One soars in the presence of the Son's love
Feeling His voice tenderly saying come
Feast at my table of gifts tasty, Dove
Focus your eyes upon my beauty some

Ride to life's sunset whatever circumstance
It may present, hold my hand_understand
This is new ground for me_hope accrescence
In love of mankind for heading to promise land

Uncertain skies streaked with gray, sun at bay
Love can lift, sustain, ingrain us for day!

accrescence means growth, continous growth
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Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/13/2012 7:39:00 AM

simply divine, sara... your reflections rub on me so well on a sunday blessed by you.. beautiful kind of love.. best wishes and huggs!..:)

Jack Horne

Date: 5/13/2012 7:23:00 AM

beautiful indeed, Sara

David Williams

Date: 5/12/2012 10:43:00 AM

Sara, I like this, good luck, ...I cannot reply to blogs,,system error..my latest grandson is only 1 week old born in Sydney, Australia, my son and his wife and now child are about to move to Melbourne for his work , 12000 mile gap, so once they have settled in we hope to travel over, his name is Thomas (my father) Garrett (my wife's father) Williams, would have liked to put it on your blog, but couldn't...David