Come On, Wake Up

can't just wait for life to get exciting
passively sitting waiting
while nothing stirs inside



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Andrea Dietrich

January 10, 2018 at 3:28 PM

oh, Line, I can't believe you cannot make some excitement in your life. Get up and dance the macarena RIGHT NOW (a good description of this empty feeling)

Line Gauthier

January 10, 2018 at 3:54 PM

oh, Andrea, You're quite right that it's definitely not about me...

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 10, 2018 at 10:02 AM

A well stated description of Inertia that, certainly, would lead one to nowhere my friend, Line!

Line Gauthier

January 10, 2018 at 1:23 PM

Thanks for your visit, Demetrios.

Joseph May

January 10, 2018 at 4:20 AM

Like Carole says they got to grab life by the horns and bring the excitement...

Line Gauthier

January 10, 2018 at 1:24 PM

Thanks for your visit, Joseph.

Carole Duet

January 10, 2018 at 2:14 AM

Hi Line! Interesting little poem. I hope whoever is doing the waiting in this poem meets someone exciting this year; someone who will compel him or her to get up out of that chair and grab life by the ...horns? lol

Line Gauthier

January 10, 2018 at 1:24 PM

Thank you, Carole. Much appreciate your visit.