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can't just wait for life to get exciting passively sitting waiting while nothing stirs inside AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on January 9, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2018 3:28:00 PM

oh, Line, I can't believe you cannot make some excitement in your life. Get up and dance the macarena RIGHT NOW (a good description of this empty feeling)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/10/2018 3:54:00 PM

oh, Andrea, You're quite right that it's definitely not about me...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/10/2018 10:02:00 AM

A well stated description of Inertia that, certainly, would lead one to nowhere my friend, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/10/2018 1:23:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, Demetrios.

Joseph May

Date: 1/10/2018 4:20:00 AM

Like Carole says they got to grab life by the horns and bring the excitement...

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/10/2018 1:24:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, Joseph.

Carole Duet

Date: 1/10/2018 2:14:00 AM

Hi Line! Interesting little poem. I hope whoever is doing the waiting in this poem meets someone exciting this year; someone who will compel him or her to get up out of that chair and grab life by the ...horns? lol

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/10/2018 1:24:00 PM

Thank you, Carole. Much appreciate your visit.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 1/9/2018 6:08:00 PM

As life passes by , a great little kimo Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/9/2018 6:29:00 PM

Thank you, Lewis. Much appreciated.