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Where you from? Do you know Jim? Of course I do. He's a nice guy too. What do you do? -- You say you're a teacher? Well, we need a good teacher. Yes, we do. Married with kids? -- That's nice to hear. Come on over with the Missus; we'll have a few beers You say you don't drink? You don't like football? -- Sure nice to meet you. I'll give you a call...

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Date: 11/21/2019 9:13:00 AM
Ha ha ha, got to know "em, before you chuck "em . . . ; )
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Date: 11/19/2019 8:41:00 PM
That's fabulous, Gershon. I love it. Men like things simple. I'm obviously not that bright, it took me a long time to figure for myself the brilliant message between these few lines. Brilliant, Gershon. A FAVE for me.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/19/2019 8:46:00 PM
Aw, c'mon, Line. I won't permit anyone criticizing my friend and fellow poet, Line Gauthier! (And 'brightness' is what society narrowly restricts to 'critical thinking.'... E.g., I'm just in awe of your 'Shape' poems. I can't see things the way you do. But 'artistic seeing' is not valued as 'brightness.' Bah Humbug!)… At any rate, thank you so much for the FAVE. Yours truly, Gershon
Date: 11/19/2019 8:41:00 PM
Could be a lot of yawning going on lol.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/19/2019 8:47:00 PM
--But action-packed yawning, I hope! LOL. Thanks, Tom! ~ gw
Date: 11/19/2019 7:23:00 PM
Hi Gershon. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/19/2019 8:42:00 PM
And thank you, Gregory, for the appreciation! :) gw
Date: 11/19/2019 6:21:00 PM
I have had similar conversations, this is a fun little ditty!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/19/2019 8:41:00 PM
Hope you haven't had to bear the brunt of the rejection, Michelle! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 11/19/2019 4:26:00 PM
Doesn't sound like the life of the party to me. : ) Fun one my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/19/2019 8:40:00 PM
This oddball may well be the death of many a party---but he'll be the center of attention at the 'Life After Death' parties, no doubt! LOL. Thanks, Chris. ~ Gershon

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