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Come On Board | Cannes

Come on Board

A New Start

A ship, well-crafted, needs a careful chart.
On the vast sea of life, the vessel starts.
First, fuel her boiler with a steady hand,
Wholesome provisions from a fertile land.
To keep her engine strong, her pistons bright,
She needs the labor of the day and night.
A constant flow of cool, clear, flowing streams,
To purge the lines and feed her waking dreams.
Unfurl the sails to catch the solar rays,
A guiding beacon for the journey’s way.
Let moderation steer, not rush nor creep,
Through quiet channels of the tranquil deep.
Draw deep the breath of pure, unfettered air,
A silent gift, a strength beyond compare.
At anchor, find the calm when tempests cease,
And trust the Pilot brings the port of peace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 12:39 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/powerful write again. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 1, 2026 at 5:11 PM
Again, with my thanks.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 1:40 AM
Lovely poem and great couplets. Happy New Year.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Much appreciation and gratitude, Aloha.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 4:24 PM
insightful thoughts that gave me pause as I think about the closing of this year. Your ability to rhyme always amazes me. This line spoke to me: Let moderation steer, not rush nor creep, Faving
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 4:48 PM
I am taking a much-needed hiatus from posting any poems for a while as I share myself with family and dear loved ones. Aloha, William.
George Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 4:30 AM
Life is a voyage. As the ship charts its course and steers through breakers and tempests, we have to be adequately prepared to begin a new voyage. Great thoughts, dear friend.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 10:17 AM
Gratefully appreciated, thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 11:09 AM
Love it! Welcome aboard!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 12:45 PM
Nice of you to say, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 10:30 AM
Great lesson on driving a sea craft. You did well.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 12:42 PM
A welcomed sentiment, thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 9:10 AM
"Come on Board"  is a wonderful/powerful write. Have a Very Blessed Christmas and New Year 2026.  Also have a lovely day/week writing away............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 12:39 PM
Thank you, my friend.
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