Come On

Ideas are slapping me in the gut today.
I shove one, another falls, one urges me to play.
I bite them and smash them and slash them to bits.
They keep coming back, not caring if I scream or have fits.

Come on! I say to my imagination. Give me a break.
She takes out a potato and starts broiling a steak.
A pink dinosaur with orange dots stands on my head.
I guess these ideas will keep coming until I am dead.,
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Goldsmith Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Again, thanks for the laugh. You are so very funny. Love your writes. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Krutsinger Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 7:06 PM
Thank you Paula I appreciate it
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 2:12 PM
They should make a sitcom of you :)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 1:23 AM
They really should
Gelok Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Lucky you to have such a vivid imagination. Wish I could take a peek into your mind...wow!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 1:24 AM
Some days I feel like my mind is a fishbowl and people are laughing at my fish
Hankins Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 9:47 AM
I am sure that is true for you, Caren. You have a marvelous creative sense of the fantasy.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 1:25 AM
Thanks Hank. I love to play- my inner child rules this machine.
DiMino Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 6:05 AM
Dead, or truly alive. Love it! Fantastic writing!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 1:25 AM
Thank you kindly Joe
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