Marilene Evans Poet Verse

Come On

COME ON

Hello,
genius! break time,
lets go.

Don’t be
so absorbed, look
at me.

Come on!
Get up right now.
Get on.


4/1/21      Finding Your Musette 2 Poetry
Photo #4   Joseph May


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Kim Merryman April 26, 2021 at 12:53 PM Cute interpretation of the picture, Marilene! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M Marilene Evans April 26, 2021 at 1:26 PM Thanks so much, Kim. Had to let my imagination do the work. Have a great day.

Alexis Y. April 25, 2021 at 11:55 AM Hi Marilene, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-)Alexis Marilene Evans April 25, 2021 at 12:04 PM Hi Alexis. Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2021 at 4:01 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win with his creative Musette. Blessings Marilene Evans April 25, 2021 at 11:10 AM Thank you, Connie. Have a great Sunday.

Joseph May April 24, 2021 at 10:48 AM Love the humor in your first stanza Marilene, Congrats on your win Marilene Evans April 24, 2021 at 11:59 AM I didn't even know I have a sense of humor. Usually, I'm the only one who laughs, when I express the humor in me. Thank you for my placement, Joseph! Have a great week-end.

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2021 at 1:11 PM a cute one. I better get on the ball and try it. Marilene Evans April 2, 2021 at 1:46 PM Thanks, Andrea. Yes, you better. I'll be out of town, so need to do it before I leave. Enjoy your Easter Sunday.

Alexis Y. April 2, 2021 at 12:30 PM Hi Marilene, You penned a humourous entry for the contest. Your words matched your chosen photo. Have a great day and have a Happy Easter:-) Alexis Marilene Evans April 2, 2021 at 12:35 PM I enjoyed doing this one. Just being naughty, silly, flirty and foolish for April Fools Day. Happy Easter.

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 2, 2021 at 10:46 AM Hi Marilene, Loved this funny and flirty poem - as you have described it! Hope you had fun April Fool's Day! Happy Easter! Mala Marilene Evans April 2, 2021 at 12:01 PM Thanks so much, Mala.... I had fun writing the poem. I was so busy with my two classes for April Fools Day, drawing and photography. Enjoy your Easter Sunday.

Michelle Faulkner April 1, 2021 at 8:07 PM Hi Marilene, I like the fun flirty vibe of this, especially 'don't be so absorbed, look at me!' I have felt that way many times with my own husband :) best wishes for the contest~ Marilene Evans April 1, 2021 at 9:08 PM Thanks so much, Michelle! Today is April Fools Day, I felt like being foolish, funny and flirty. Tell him, to get on with it.... ha-ha-ha... Happy Easter!