Come On

COME ON Hello, genius! break time, lets go. Don’t be so absorbed, look at me. Come on! Get up right now. Get on. 4/1/21 Finding Your Musette 2 Poetry Photo #4 Joseph May Checked: PS Grammar Checker and Syllable Counter How Many Syllables and RhymeZone

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/26/2021 12:53:00 PM

Cute interpretation of the picture, Marilene! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/26/2021 1:26:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim. Had to let my imagination do the work. Have a great day.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/25/2021 11:55:00 AM

Hi Marilene, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/25/2021 12:04:00 PM

Hi Alexis. Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2021 4:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win with his creative Musette. Blessings

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/25/2021 11:10:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. Have a great Sunday.

Joseph May

Date: 4/24/2021 10:48:00 AM

Love the humor in your first stanza Marilene, Congrats on your win

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/24/2021 11:59:00 AM

I didn't even know I have a sense of humor. Usually, I'm the only one who laughs, when I express the humor in me. Thank you for my placement, Joseph! Have a great week-end.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2021 1:11:00 PM

a cute one. I better get on the ball and try it.

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/2/2021 1:46:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Yes, you better. I'll be out of town, so need to do it before I leave. Enjoy your Easter Sunday.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/2/2021 12:30:00 PM

Hi Marilene, You penned a humourous entry for the contest. Your words matched your chosen photo. Have a great day and have a Happy Easter:-) Alexis

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/2/2021 12:35:00 PM

I enjoyed doing this one. Just being naughty, silly, flirty and foolish for April Fools Day. Happy Easter.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/2/2021 10:46:00 AM

Hi Marilene, Loved this funny and flirty poem - as you have described it! Hope you had fun April Fool's Day! Happy Easter! Mala

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/2/2021 12:01:00 PM

Thanks so much, Mala.... I had fun writing the poem. I was so busy with my two classes for April Fools Day, drawing and photography. Enjoy your Easter Sunday.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/1/2021 8:07:00 PM

Hi Marilene, I like the fun flirty vibe of this, especially 'don't be so absorbed, look at me!' I have felt that way many times with my own husband :) best wishes for the contest~

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/1/2021 9:08:00 PM

Thanks so much, Michelle! Today is April Fools Day, I felt like being foolish, funny and flirty. Tell him, to get on with it.... ha-ha-ha... Happy Easter!