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Come, My Shooting Star

Come, my shooting star, Open my door, As the night is so long in your absence, Come, my sweet dove, Open my poem, As my verses are so sad, in your absence, Come, my silk angel, Spread your wings, To take me to the sky of Sicily tomorrow, Come, my zither, come, Open your music, The one, the only one, that makes my heart vibrate

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Date: 7/23/2024 1:50:00 PM
Nice one. I enjoyed reading it today. Creative and descriptive. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Yann Rolland
Date: 7/24/2024 1:39:00 AM
thanks sara, for commenting this little talented poem, i m touched yann
Date: 7/19/2023 8:46:00 PM
So romantic. One of my favorites I have read tonight.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 7/19/2023 9:32:00 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea

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