Come, My Shooting Star

Come, my shooting star,
Open my door,
As the night is so long in your absence,

Come, my sweet dove,
Open my poem,
As my verses are so sad, in your absence,

Come, my silk angel,
Spread your wings,
To take me to the sky of Sicily tomorrow, 

Come, my zither, come,
Open your music,
The one, the only one, that makes my heart vibrate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2024 at 1:50 PM
Nice one. I enjoyed reading it today. Creative and descriptive. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 1:39 AM
thanks sara, for commenting this little talented poem, i m touched yann
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 8:46 PM
So romantic. One of my favorites I have read tonight.
Rolland Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea
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