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Come It Will

Mist sweeps the garden Settles like Saharan dust Gold round the lake's edge.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/30/2020 5:55:00 PM
Nicely done and in 17 syllables! as 5-7-5
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/14/2021 5:12:00 AM
Thank you Joan. Just discovering haiku.
Date: 1/16/2020 9:39:00 AM
That is a lovely image, thank you!
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/14/2021 5:14:00 AM
You’re very kind, Kim. Thank you.
Date: 1/15/2020 10:50:00 AM
this is such a beautiful image... exquisite haiku Peter!
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/14/2021 5:15:00 AM
Thanks for this lovely comment, Sandra.
Date: 1/15/2020 7:59:00 AM
Exquisite depiction of scenic moments, Peter.
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/14/2021 5:16:00 AM
Nice to hear from you Vijay. Thanks for your comment.
Date: 1/15/2020 7:11:00 AM
Rather beautiful.
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/14/2021 5:16:00 AM
Thank you my friend.

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