Come It Will

Mist sweeps the garden
Settles like Saharan dust
Gold round the lake's edge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Fingon Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Nicely done and in 17 syllables! as 5-7-5
Rees Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 5:12 AM
Thank you Joan. Just discovering haiku.
James Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 9:39 AM
That is a lovely image, thank you!
Rees Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 5:14 AM
You’re very kind, Kim. Thank you.
Adams Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 10:50 AM
this is such a beautiful image... exquisite haiku Peter!
Rees Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 5:15 AM
Thanks for this lovely comment, Sandra.
Pandit Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Exquisite depiction of scenic moments, Peter.
Rees Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 5:16 AM
Nice to hear from you Vijay. Thanks for your comment.
Kiser Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 7:11 AM
Rather beautiful.
Rees Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 5:16 AM
Thank you my friend.
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