Come Inside

Your heavy heart is weary, worn
Bloody and bruised, it’s fiercely torn
To Loneliness, a vow you've sworn
To dwell in night without a morn
Come inside

To live and love, you've lost your will 
Of sorrow’s cup you've had your fill
Desire’s longing, quiet…still
Heart frozen by rejection’s chill
Come inside

Chorus
Come inside my chamber, feel the fire
Come inside my heart, dip in desire
Come inside my soul, devoid of brier
Come inside my mind, your pain retire

Refrain
Come
Come
Come inside my body, come inside
Come and dip inside my pleasure’s tide
Come inside my body, come inside
Come glide into heaven, come abide
Come
Come
Come…..I N S I D E

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mohammed Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 6:31 AM
Lovely work Eileen. I feel the passion emanating from your poem. Happy new year to you.
Manassian Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Same to you, my dear....Thanks for the visit. Wishing you all the best.
Fraser Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 5:10 AM
You sure got your hand on the oven switch there Eileen and its DAMM HOT inside, love to hear the music for this, blessings Carl
Manassian Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 5:33 AM
Well, in the cold season, with the wild, rain, and storm.....how better to be than HOT! ;) Thanks for the visit!
Virden Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 12:04 AM
Wowza!!! Sweet and hot all at the same time... What an invitation! Happy New Year ! XOXOX
Manassian Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 5:35 AM
Thanks, my dear....Happy New Year to you too! Hugs!
Jones Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 10:35 PM
We'll..lovely poem sweetie...filled with passions invitation ....aahhh to be young....happy new year....MD
Manassian Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 5:35 AM
Oh sweetie.............I'm not that young, but my heart is....and always will be.....Thanks for the visit. Hope you have a fabulous New Year! Love ya!
Onclaud Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 11:05 AM
how appealing can this get, and so inviting as well, eileen.. may the new year usher the graces of hopes fulfilled.. huggs
Manassian Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 5:36 AM
Thanks, Nette. This is a lovely comment. I appreciate your continued support and visits and lovely remarks. Bless you. May the New Year find your dreams coming true as well.
Carroll Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 9:43 PM
Hi Eileen, Sizzling romantic write..Hope you're enjoying the holidays! Ken
Manassian Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 5:37 AM
:) Thanks, Ken. Coming from a poet who writes passionate work, this is a high compliment. All the best for the New Year! :)
Horsman Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 5:09 PM
you sure inspire with beautiful poetry such as this,,,,,have a wonderful new year Eileen, and to all your love ones....Harry
Manassian Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 5:32 PM
Harry....so good to hear from you. Thanks ever so much for this lovely visit and post. Hope all is well with you and your loved ones and that you enjoyed a lovely Christmas. God bless..........
Bauer Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 4:01 PM
i'm sure that many people would be happy to take you up on this invitation! great poem, eileen..........
Manassian Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 5:34 PM
Thanks, my dear Ilene. I hope this can somehow be turned into a love song. Wouldn't that be awesome.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 9:08 AM
This is fantastic! I somehow think you have more verses to write for this one. It feel it could be even more spectacular.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 8:01 PM
I will give it some thought.
Manassian Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 5:35 PM
WOW! Well....I really don't now how else I could embellish it without becoming too......well, let me give it some thought and see what I can come up with. Any suggestions? I'm all ears..........Or in this cyber world.....I'm all EYES!
Tacito Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Damn, YES! I'll sip another cup of what you're having. True story. I hope you had a wonderful Xmas. ;-)
Manassian Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 5:36 PM
I will gladly share the cup with you, Drake. Gladly....Yes, so far so good. I've had a wonderful time with family. It couldn't be better. Hope you have been equally blessed. Hugs
Mehta Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 4:36 AM
Lovely, beautiful poem, Eileen
Manassian Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Why, thank you, Dr Ram. :)
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December 27, 2013 at 2:07 AM
~W O W~ Eileen, you have a beautiful heart.... xox..Linda
Manassian Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 5:39 PM
OXOXOXO.......Thanks every so much, Linda. Very sweet of you to say that. Hope you will be showered with wonderful surprises in the new year.
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