Come In My Garden-H

Once saw you freshly bathed, with unstained glowing skin
With hair like lakes that glint, fair beneath the stars
Piercing grey-blue eyes, desiring heart a-cry
The greenest of things blue, the bluest of things grey.

You fuller pouty lower lip, allure to my upper lip
Don’t need to get tips, as lips beautiful sink ships
remembering your look, making me quite nervous
Those leaning eyes, increasing my heart beats.

Come in my garden, roses want to see you blossoming
The recesses of my heart needs to feel throbbing
Come, my mind wishes some intellectual touches
Come in my dreams, I wish to confront life’s daydreams.

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Dr. Ram mehta
Honorable mention
Contest: The Inside Rhyme sponsored by Deborah Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Dr. Ram This is a very romantic, passionate, charming and love filled write. Thank you for the nice comment on my Life's Path poem.
Aul Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 9:15 AM
Congrats on the HM in the contest ...... George
Freeman Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 7:17 PM
Congratulations Dr Ram on your worthy poem's honered success. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram in Debbie Guzzi's contest "The Rhyme Inside". Love, Carol
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March 29, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Don't know how I missed this one earlier, Dr. Ram, but really love the way you invite this beautiful woman into your garden so the roses can see HER blooming. She sounds so beautiful! Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 9:41 PM
Congrats on the winners' list, Dr. Ram. Yours was a very pretty poem.
Mehta Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 9:28 PM
Dr Ram - Many Congrats on big win with this superb creative write. Luv & Best wishes-Hitendra Mehta
Mannan Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 8:59 PM
Oh such a heart warming rhyme. Warm congrats for this win.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 7:49 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your HM in Debbie's contest with this excellent entry and enjoyable write my friend.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
George   Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 7:06 PM
Very yearning and romatic. Many congrats on your well deserved win, Dr. Ram. Elaine
Garmer Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 9:09 PM
oh the mystical feeling of true love.... :)
Durbin Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 2:11 PM
What a romantic tale!
Knop Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 8:45 AM
great imagery, Dr. Ram! Enjoyed the read this late Sunday afternoon!...All the best!...Gert
Maverick Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 9:01 AM
Like the interplay between the colour definitions Dr Ram, also the allure you have so well projected here.
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 1:15 AM
Hey, very nice, reminds me of when we had those Adam and eve poems in the garden!! Most interesting when you said greenest of blue and bluest of grey. Reminds me of when I put my green contacts over my blue grey eyes or my bue contacts over them!! Was this for a contest?
Sweetheart Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 11:26 PM
Lovely lines Dr. Ram.. imagery so vibrant my friend..especially your second verse.. my hubby is always teasing me about my pouty lips too.. good luck if for any contest my friend..
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