Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

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Unseeking Seeker's Quietus 2026 Contest

Come, Hush Of Eve

Come , hush of eve as hands unfold
stillness tinged with prayer;
My breaths flinging the gritty cold
As peace lies restful there.

Inner core lilts, to flow 
With gentle soul aglow;
Dissolving frayed hours' blow.

When' mind's roars leave...
Come, hush of eve.

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Paige Hind March 23, 2026 at 6:42 PM enchanting!! love your ending <3

Frederic Parker March 20, 2026 at 4:40 PM Like an internal prayer quoted by the soul

Paul Callus March 20, 2026 at 7:08 AM As the name of this poetic form implies, I can feel the soothing effect of your words, Nette. The quietude of evening evokes a sense of calm as you open yourself to prayer, while emptying the mind of any worries. ~ Warm regards, my friend // paul

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2026 at 10:19 PM wow, this is exceptional, Nette. Soupmail for ya.