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Come Home To Me

COME HOME TO ME Beyond that mountain Echo strides Foodsteps faultless led by stars Eager to assume our life Master players in the game-- love wars-- Weaving, jumping by your lanky side Snapping, urging on to play the rush Is your dauntless canine friend Eager for his own heart’s crush That curls her lazy tail ‘round cradle’s bend 'Ere dawn near blaze Dreams’s Drowsy time-- Reluctantly I free your hand Slowly wake-- to mewling nudge-- our newborn babe whose nuzzle blushes memories to my breast Gathering wood-- Building fires— Round the hearth Some Women wait-- Some Women roam-- While weaving safety nets for Children in a nest of home. Hands upon a thousand tasks While Heart upon a certain man--- Hand upon whatever chore Knowing that the man beloved Is whistling closer Step by step Beyond that Mountain Dog a leaping, joy abounds-- Manly strides --familiar tunes-- As the North Star Counts the joy of homeward steps.

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Date: 6/6/2013 11:39:00 PM
It's a beautiful time sketch, where you have tried to capture the moments which often attracts us to create Poetry as sublime as this one. Great write Victoria from a place which is surrounded with extreme colds and snowy extremes. It was a joy to read your poem which I will read more soon and thank you for your precious words on my Rape Victim Poem. I am sure that you must have seen and heard the Song also. If possible please your comments on You Tube also. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 6/13/2013 6:33:00 PM
Ravindra-always a joy to find you reading my work..your comments are astute and instructive....I did write my comments on the you tube Rape Victim pc that you wrote as you mentioned....thanks again...Victoria
Date: 5/24/2013 10:25:00 AM
who could resist, with poetry as sublime as this
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 6/13/2013 6:34:00 PM
Harry, you know where I live! HA... Alaska just seems around the corner.....thanks for reading/commenting, as always....you are one of my favorite readers...
Date: 5/23/2013 7:19:00 AM
The verbiage & flow of this piece was spectacular. A true capture of life in your stanzas. Wonderful!
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 6/13/2013 6:35:00 PM
a forgotten note....women are always waiting it seems, and men are too...but we just don't think about the reverse....thanks always for reading my work..
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 5/23/2013 3:06:00 PM
thanks, Drake, It is a bit unusual, I know, but living in Alaska, it is easy to imagine these women in these times. thanks for reading.

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