Come Home Baby

Come home baby


Thinking back...         
over my lifetime
mistakes I've made,
I realize...

so much pain ,       
my life's in tatters...
it come's as no surprise

Now I know...
I'll wait a lifetime,
four score years,
if you're the prize...

take your time,
I know you're hurting...
this time, 
I'll dry your eyes

Chorus

There's one thing I know (I know)
I want you to come home baby
(I know) I want you home to stay
There's one thing I know (I know)
I want you to come home baby
(I know) I want you home to stay


Looking back...
I see it clearly,
you needed,
so much more from me

Give me time...
just be patient
I'll be all,
you need me to be

bridge
I want you home to stay!
I want you home to stay!

Go to chorus

Think about...
the lonely night time
why should we,
spend it all alone?

Think of us...
We need each other
Why don't you
please come home?

chorus repeat
fade

John Derek Hamilton
October 25,2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 27, 2016 at 6:13 AM
Nice flow and the sentiment is affecting, good one John!
Hamilton Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Paloma
Daniel Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 1:15 AM
I agree with Daniel, this is truly one of your best, John:) do you compose music for all your lyrics, John??
Hamilton Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Some songs have music others not yet, working on the lyrics for now. Thanks Jo
Turner Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 3:56 PM
John, you're quite the lyricist. This is one of your best, i think:)
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 4:34 PM
Thanks Daniel, yeah, sometimes they feel good as they flow out so easy, songs are easier for me than poetry, not a big fan of structured writes, but I do them to give myself more discipline.
Chircop Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 2:49 PM
Such a fabulous lyric song..I can hear the sad longing melody in my ear...Awesome..Charma.
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 2:51 PM
Thanks Charma, sorry comment jumped!
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 2:49 PM
Thanks Heidi
Sands Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 2:35 PM
This is great John! I like it.
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 2:50 PM
Sorry comment jumped thanks Heidi!
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