White Wolf Poet Rhyme

Come Flooding Back:

As dawn appears in golden rays,
A hint of jasmine fills the air,
This night has passed so achingly,
Though my heart is still filled with care.

I think back to all those moments,
In time, the distant memories,
Come flooding back in elegance,
Like a warm breeze across the seas.

These moments so rare and precious,
Those memories you gave to me,
More moving than the burning sun,
So why can't I just let them be?

(Eight syllables per line)

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Tim Smith December 7, 2016 at 1:03 PM Beautifully written...they memories have had such a positive impact you never wish to forget them.

Eve Roper December 7, 2016 at 10:21 AM love the scene you put me in to see and smell. Oh, those memories that are meant to stay and linger in our hearts are meant to fill us with love and hope... In an in and out relationship we have to let go because if we don't the bad will destroy us.. even though some were good.. Good write, Rick. Hugs Eve

Chris Green December 7, 2016 at 8:35 AM Good question at the end my friend and one I know I can't answer, because it is one I often ask myself. Your poem is beautiful throughout, the scene you create is soothing and really touches me this morning. If you ever o find the answer to that question, let me know...will'ya?

Paloma P December 7, 2016 at 8:16 AM I think an accurate assumption would be because you're human Rick. :) 'Let it be', is a Beatles' song and nothing to do with reality. :)

Heidi Sands December 7, 2016 at 8:09 AM Very special Rick! I like this one :)

Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2016 at 7:53 AM So beautiful, Rick! Come flooding back...like a warm breeze across the seas. 7

Probir Gupta December 7, 2016 at 4:37 AM Very well expressed ... 'Like a warm breeze across the seas' is an impressive line ... nice ... White Wolf December 7, 2016 at 4:40 AM Thank you, Probir /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2016 at 4:22 AM - This is beautiful, Rick - Thanks - hugs // Anne-Lise :) White Wolf December 7, 2016 at 4:28 AM Thanks for your kind comment /|\

Darren White December 7, 2016 at 3:15 AM Letting be is the hardest thing to do. Writing about it is beautiful though. White Wolf December 7, 2016 at 3:20 AM Thank you, Darren /|\