Come Dive the Leaves

Come dive the leaves in varnished shades along a sway in rippling sets from green and mauve to orange blades come dive the leaves in varnished shades in swirls of iridescent braids while all soft twirls adorn wind’s nests come dive the leaves in varnished shades along a sway in rippling sets As glassy sheen weaves through the trees leaves bend in worship through hummed light while turning cheeks flushed from the breeze As glassy sheen weaves through the trees and through ribbed stalks, stars dance in flight that flicker through fine bower’s eaves as glassy sheen weaves through the trees they bend in worship to hummed light © ttriolet in iambic tetrameter . …. .. Each cycle brings its own spiritual energy that makes my world dance with my own sense of being...' to everything , there is a season..' Giorgio V.'s Beloved Poems Contest by nette onclaud
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A  Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 8:12 PM
nice winning poem................. LUV.............. SKAT
Taylor Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 11:01 AM
Way to go, Nette. Great job. luv, Ralph
Hendricks Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 6:40 AM
Beautiful, Nette. Congratulations for top placement in the contest, my friend. Your eloquence appeals. Licia :-)
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 6:46 PM
You sure nailed it, nette. Gorgeous triolets. BIG congrats.
Nusairat Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 5:52 PM
Beautifully written...congrats on your win
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 2:22 PM
Great rhythm, rhyme and flow to this winning work.Congrats..Sara
A  Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 1:47 PM
Nette, love your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~
Rain Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations !! Very deserved win , I love this poem , it is art in all forms .
Richards Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 9:05 AM
Who could not love this lovely poem of nature, and the delight of diving into the rust and gold of autumn.....this is surely a beloved poem! Congrats to you Nette!
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 4:50 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, nette
A   Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 7:33 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poems" win. xox~ LINDA
Adams Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 7:17 PM
this is a gem of a poem, beautifully written...congrats on your win :)
Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Debbie Guzzi 's "Change for the Meter" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 7:56 AM
Congrats Nette on your win!Beautiful poem.
Williams Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 1:28 AM
nice win, thank you, Al
K. Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 12:57 AM
You sure got some awesome lines here, nette! I can't help but want to dive in those leaves as well! Beautiful series of triolet! Galing naman! Super congrats on your win and hugs :)
Guzzi Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 5:50 PM
Some of the lines are heart breakingly beautiful yet I long for the pause given by punctuation, the emphasis given by the transferance of a complete clear thought. I like the lighter font! The ending was perfection from [In pure delight down!] Congrad's on your wondrous skill! [I'd love to see your paintings?] Light & Love
Lefanue Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette, beautiful use of words! Maureen
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 12:22 PM
A beautiful read nette Congratulations xx
Johnson Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 10:59 AM
Your meter never falters and your triolets are beautiful. Congratulations on yur win. Love, Joyce
Williams Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Nette congrats on your win, a great Triolet..David
Maverick Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on your triolet win here Nette, 'enjoyed the many aspects you displayed here..)
Quigley Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 8:54 AM
Congratulations Nette. Nicely done
Song Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 10:14 PM
I am glad you truly like the jar write Nette bc I was thinking something when I wrote it...how would Nette describe me running with my jar in my parent's front yard..that's how I came up with a few of those lines...Thanks for inspiring me..There is a part 2 to my Soup Mail that I am trying to think of how to write...check tomorrow...smiles...Gwendolen
Brown Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 6:44 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Nette. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol
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