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Come Close

Come for a second , come close.... Just a little bit closer... Let's be quiet for a while... Can you hear that ? Can you hear that sound of pumping ? It's my heart beating loud for you... Screaming out , torturing.... Demanding your love

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/25/2016 12:17:00 PM

This is amazing and lovely. Thank you for the incredible share.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/25/2016 2:10:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear for ur sweet sweet comment, it's much appreciated, hugs / / :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/18/2016 7:15:00 PM

my heart can only scream the name....of she who will end my pain....the lady who injects Beauty in my eyes....the woman who demands only untold lies....the girl who will finally complete my Life....the only being God Wants To Be my wife....such a Beautiful and inspiring piece dalia....;)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/18/2016 7:40:00 PM

I'm touched by your mesmerizing words , I'm speechless really I thank you for your sweet sweet comment, I appreciate it, hugs / / :)

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 1/15/2016 7:35:00 PM

Good write Dalia

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/16/2016 5:16:00 AM

Thank you my dear , I appreciate it...hugs / / :)

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/10/2016 8:15:00 AM

wow...dis is excellent.....i love it

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 8:21:00 AM

Thank you very much my friend for ur sweet and supportive words, I'm delighted by ur lovely comment, I appreciate it ,hugs / / :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/10/2016 3:18:00 AM

Mmmm.....in the silence of love your passion drums good Dalia...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 4:44:00 AM

Thank you very much for your lovely, awesome comment , I'm delighted by ur sweet visit , hugs / / :)

White Sage

Date: 1/10/2016 1:58:00 AM

Demanding really showed how strong the pine is...excellent write dear, it's lovely

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 3:08:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear for ur supportive words and your pleasant comment, I'm glad u liked it , hugs / / :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/10/2016 12:04:00 AM

Lovely. Enjoyed read. Yet, in the last line, if you wrote Seeking instead of Demanding, going to be so lovely in my view.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 12:10:00 AM

Thank you my friend for ur lovely comment and I appreciate your help but demanding is more powerful word I think, so I guess I'm gonna keep it like this , thank you for your delightful visit , much appreciated, hugs / / :)