Come Close

Come for a second , come close....

                                                  Just a little bit closer...

                                                Let's be quiet for a while...

                                                     Can you hear that ?

                                      Can you hear that sound of pumping ?

                                          It's my heart beating loud for you...

                                                 Screaming out , torturing....

                                                   Demanding your love
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Makama Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 12:17 PM
This is amazing and lovely. Thank you for the incredible share.
Shahein Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Thank you very much my dear for ur sweet sweet comment, it's much appreciated, hugs / / :)
Boddie Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 7:15 PM
my heart can only scream the name....of she who will end my pain....the lady who injects Beauty in my eyes....the woman who demands only untold lies....the girl who will finally complete my Life....the only being God Wants To Be my wife....such a Beautiful and inspiring piece dalia....;)
Shahein Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 7:40 PM
I'm touched by your mesmerizing words , I'm speechless really I thank you for your sweet sweet comment, I appreciate it, hugs / / :)
Mason Gibbs Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 7:35 PM
Good write Dalia
Shahein Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 5:16 AM
Thank you my dear , I appreciate it...hugs / / :)
Legend Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:15 AM
wow...dis is excellent.....i love it
Shahein Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Thank you very much my friend for ur sweet and supportive words, I'm delighted by ur lovely comment, I appreciate it ,hugs / / :)
Bordner Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 3:18 AM
Mmmm.....in the silence of love your passion drums good Dalia...J.A.B.
Shahein Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 4:44 AM
Thank you very much for your lovely, awesome comment , I'm delighted by ur sweet visit , hugs / / :)
Sage Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 1:58 AM
Demanding really showed how strong the pine is...excellent write dear, it's lovely
Shahein Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 3:08 AM
Thank you very much my dear for ur supportive words and your pleasant comment, I'm glad u liked it , hugs / / :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 12:04 AM
Lovely. Enjoyed read. Yet, in the last line, if you wrote Seeking instead of Demanding, going to be so lovely in my view.
Shahein Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 12:10 AM
Thank you my friend for ur lovely comment and I appreciate your help but demanding is more powerful word I think, so I guess I'm gonna keep it like this , thank you for your delightful visit , much appreciated, hugs / / :)
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