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A Villanelle
A Villanelle is nineteen-lines with a ( aba aba aba aba aba abaa ) rhyming scheme.
Repetitive lines are part of the form  the first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem  and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).

Come Christmas Eve; I'd hear the sleigh bells peal, accompanied by carolers singing, like most kids, I believed Santa was real. Getting gifts would trigger a smile or squeal belting-out songs of jingle bells ringing, come Christmas Eve, I'd hear the sleigh bells peal. I cannot describe the joy I would feel dreaming of the toys, Rudolph was bringing, like most kids, I believed Santa was real. Mom would prepare a festive turkey meal while dad dodged snowballs, we kids kept flinging, come Christmas Eve; I'd hear the sleigh bells peal. When I was young, Christmas was a big deal mostly due to my Christian upbringing, like most kids, I believed Santa was real. The holiday season increased my zeal to build forts from snowflakes wet and clinging. Come, Christmas Eve, I'd hear the sleigh bells peal, like most kids, I believed Santa was real. (Villanelle) 12/04/2020 Deck The Halls Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 12/26/2021 10:48:00 PM
So joyful! Congratulations on your high placing win in the contest, and thank you so very much for sharing it! May the new year ahead be filled with health, much joy and many more beautiful memories for you and those whom you love <3
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/27/2021 7:37:00 AM
Thanks, BJ, I appreciate it, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/26/2021 5:08:00 PM
Delightfully fashioned villanelle with poignant imagery of loving times past. All the best to you Eve.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/27/2021 7:36:00 AM
Thanks, Greg, I appreciate it, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/24/2021 9:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/25/2021 8:52:00 AM
Thanks, Mark, I appreciate it, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/31/2020 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Emile. Remembrance of holiday with our parents. Happy New Year’s best wishes hoping for a good up coming year. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/1/2021 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate it, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/31/2020 3:32:00 PM
Wonderful write Emile, Congrats on your win
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/31/2020 4:54:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.

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