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Come Back To My Sky

Come back to my sky O truculent sun Do not go behind your clouds of gray Do not from hunger wander away I want to feel you deep in the green Vein of leaves turning water to wine I want to breathe you from sweet vine Blowing kisses of oxygen by which I Tell your stoic anguish for me to do well O do not leave me, time writes our age On petals while our passions rage Mortal as a dew. I love your warmth Your cosy way of giving ... and dying Like us you never complain ... giving Your life to be our dust ... I am inspired By you, stay until my winter is expired.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/5/2009 10:48:00 AM
Love this image David'I want to feel you deep in the green Vein of leaves turning water to wine' Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 5/4/2009 8:15:00 PM
Oh David your talent sings in this write so many beautiful lines, mortal as dew, gosh there are way too many, going into my favs, and one more ,,,wow
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Date: 5/4/2009 10:15:00 AM
excellent write----every verse,stay until my winter is expired---i love the ending too David-----charma
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Date: 5/4/2009 8:33:00 AM
Beautiful! Well written my friend :)
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Date: 5/4/2009 6:51:00 AM
There is now hope, David. Here in Michigan the sun rarely shines, but all of a sudden...the birds and squirrels don't know what to do, they run around, fly around, confounded. Enjoyed your poem mucho! Love, daver
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