Come Back and Attack

A sly fox invaded the chicken coop
Fostering ill will in a fowl-tasting soup
With feathers festering in a cruel stew
Good hens, the fox makes a mockery of you

The fox chooses faves; others it condemns
Roost rulers say there’s a glitch in the pen
Sometimes the fox holds three races at a time
Contenders use the fox as a way to climb

Race results this dark force found a way to skew
Making a mockery of hens like me and you
If a chick is favored on the fox’s list
It shows the pride in her run’s been dismissed

The way for fair-minded chicks to strike back
Play by foxy rules; go on the attack
Resist temptation just to score a win
Don’t support fox races, to its chagrin

Patrons of drivel, weak chicks fall in line 
Are you willing to stand up and refine
A coop deserted by quality hens
Those who held the most talented pens

A quality flock this hen house once boasted
But some feathers by the fox were roasted
From spitefulness, many hens have drowned
Return equity to a coop the fox brought down

Don’t let angelic hens fly the coop
Just step back, see the truth, and then regroup
Far be it from hens to support fowl play
In other coops finer lines are displayed

If you’re one who flew due to a fox attack
Revisit the coop; we hens can strike back 



*Dedicated to all the talented ones (men and women) who flew the coop.  Not directed at one person.  Many a fox raided the coop.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Horne Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 6:19 PM
LOL, hope you'll like my new contest and blog xxx
A. Sharma Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 1:37 AM
Masterful words n a brilliant write dear Carolyn ! Hv a great day !
Smith Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 7:07 PM
Simply marvelous Carolyn.... Love the metaphor And the meaning......hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 6:51 PM
I'm not ready to fly the coop just yet Carolyn as I'm having the time of my life but I can see why some do leave. Love play on words of the Fowl-tasting soup LOL. Hugs jan xxxx
Dome Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 6:46 PM
This is wonderful made me beam. very visual, had me a bit sad for the chickens at one point. So well written you have such a great talent. take good care. best wishes. Pete.
Devonshire Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 7:04 PM
Dear Peter, It's been a pleasure seeing your work in some of the finer "coops." Would love to try writing a funny poem with you. The chickens don't need sympathy, just gumption. LOL
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