Come Back

Baby, Take me...
To a place I want to be,
With you...
Tell me that you love me too
But, you left me
Ripped my fragile heart and stopped on it twice...
You never loved me, did you?
But I loved you...
Called you my Boo
Drew me and you
I was committed...
Oh, how our realtionship was knotted... 
With so many tears and anger
We were in Danger...
But today I write this, to my one and only
I'm so lonely..
You're not here
To hold me near...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 5:19 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Deanna. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Murphy Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 11:56 AM
is this about who i think it is? and a warm welcome to you and your poetry:)
La France Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 6:46 AM
You sure captured the essence of lost love, well done and welcome~~
Culverhouse Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 5:25 PM
sounds like a no win place to be...welcome to poetry soup! Hope to see more of your writes posted in the future!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 5:04 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... this site offers many contests.. check them out and enter... and good luck..with luv..
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